ext_1647 ([identity profile] raiining.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] trace_of_scarlet 2010-08-31 10:22 pm (UTC)

Oh wonderfully done! Great romantic language and metaphor's. I love how you describe their unique - or not so unique - relationship with the city, and that last paragraph is perfect. Excellent!

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