trace_of_scarlet: (Donna = more awesome than you'll ever be)
trace_of_scarlet ([personal profile] trace_of_scarlet) wrote2011-03-29 03:53 am

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I blame [livejournal.com profile] apiphile for everything about this other than the fact that it's shit.

Scrawl a city across my skin;
carve its name on my arms with a knife.
Give me a city like a smoky dark sin;
a city, a living, a life.

Lay a city on my lips like a sacrilege;
I'll breathe it, I'll bleed it, I'll grin.
Dance to a city with my hips til its fingers dig in;
a bruise, a blessing, a sin.

Leave me homesick for a home that I've never yet had;
leave me singing, and sighing, and wrong.
But lead me to London, and I'll only go mad;
in the ways that I was all along.


I'll edit it tomorrow, if I decide it's worth it. Right now I just wish this fucking headache would go away.
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[personal profile] calluna 2011-03-29 03:38 am (UTC)(link)

I reallyreally like this. The last stanza especially!

ext_11871: (holmes: mary: will wipe the floor with y)

[identity profile] weaverandom.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
ahhhh, i really like this.

[identity profile] analogboyuk.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 11:39 am (UTC)(link)
:)

[identity profile] apiphile.livejournal.com 2011-03-29 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
QUITE happy to take credit for your creative endeavours, madam. :)