Very interesting beginning! I like how you've set up the gathering of the group, and put a few hints in place for the eventual Mickey/Martha pairing. Wilf is perfect.
Maybe you don't fully intend to write more. But you must continue it. Otherwise how will we ever solve the mystery of why Donna walks into the pub with 13 bags of shopping, and back out with only 8?! ;)
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Date: 2010-09-21 04:56 pm (UTC)Maybe you don't fully intend to write more. But you must continue it. Otherwise how will we ever solve the mystery of why Donna walks into the pub with 13 bags of shopping, and back out with only 8?! ;)