I loved this. The humor and the heart, the imagery, the voices (which were impeccable), the little one-sentence sucker punches, and just everything. I think my favorite bit was when Peggy cursed in three languages, though I can't put my finger exactly on why. Perhaps because it is so delightfully her.
The parallels between the two were so deeply felt, and I just think you pulled it all together masterfully. Perfect pacing, perfect length. Yay for this! ♥
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Date: 2011-10-07 06:39 am (UTC)I loved this. The humor and the heart, the imagery, the voices (which were impeccable), the little one-sentence sucker punches, and just everything. I think my favorite bit was when Peggy cursed in three languages, though I can't put my finger exactly on why. Perhaps because it is so delightfully her.
The parallels between the two were so deeply felt, and I just think you pulled it all together masterfully. Perfect pacing, perfect length. Yay for this! ♥